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I Don't Understand by ~Bzoo53:iconBzoo53:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


How come you say that your nothing?

Why are you so...humble?

Don't you relize?

You are worth everything to me.

You could never know how much I care for you.

You seem to be all I ever think about.

Though I don't want to admitt this,

Your one of those I couldn't live without.

I'm not so sure you relize that.

Because of you, I wish the day will end

And the next begin, so I can see you once more.

I don't understand why you apeal to me so much.

I don't understand why I seem to apeal to you.

I'm not anyone special.

Not anyone you could call "Grand."

I'm a no one.

I don't stand out.

I'm just... me.

But your worth everthing to this nobody.
©2008-2009 ~Bzoo53
:iconbzoo53:

Author's Comments

CRAPPY POEM # 1! Lol XD

So yea, I told you that since I havn't had much time to actually stop and write for a while, I've been writting quick poems. Not a bunch. But a few. Lol XP But as you can tell, this is one of them! Lol.

Well I guess this is basically how I feel. The guy that I like and so on and so forth. Lol. I'm not exactly anyone who is like pop. or whatev. I'm a norm! Lol XD Buts thats okay with me. So anyways! I guess u can kinda figure out what this ones about. I'm scared to admitt that I like this guy so much, blah blah blah. Lol, don't want to bore u here. But anyways, I hope you like it!

Might put in scraps l8ter on

Oh yea, srry bout the crummy tittle XD

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~Akuemiroku Mar 12, 2008, 9:28:01 AM
1st comment. whoooo
i think its a lovely poem! i really dont need to say this, but youre amazng at poetry ^^
oooh lala

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Cottage cheese: It's not really a cheese, it's a residue, but a residue that's good for you :cheese:
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~Mikuru-Yuki Mar 12, 2008, 1:05:12 PM
I love it!
I love you!
wow it's like you can tell what's in my mind!

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Don'cha wish your artwork was as good as mine,
don'cha wish you had a wacom tablet (inteous 3) like mine,
don'cha,
don'cha (baby),
don'cha!
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!j65 Mar 12, 2008, 2:23:28 PM
awww i bet roxas did that so he can write his feelings for namine on paper then give it to her i love the poem very much

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Think before you do stupid things.kk.
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When you cry I cry.
When you laugh I laugh
When you jump out of a window i'll laugh even harder XD
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peace out!!
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~rascal101bird Mar 12, 2008, 4:29:06 PM
HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
I LOVE IT!!! IT REMINDS ME OF NAMINE TALKING TO ROXAS!!!

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Yeah well at least I didn't sprout a robot out of my head! >3~ Fooly Cooly.
FOOLY COOLY FOOLY COOLY! xoxo. :]
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=prydeofpyron Mar 12, 2008, 5:40:22 PM
that was beautiful and the title is fine

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The prince of the twilight has spoken.
by the code of the 5 princes thine word is law
:iconmikuru-yuki:
~Mikuru-Yuki Mar 13, 2008, 8:40:09 AM
I'm like that with my BFF i couldn't live without him!

--
Don'cha wish your artwork was as good as mine,
don'cha wish you had a wacom tablet (inteous 3) like mine,
don'cha,
don'cha (baby),
don'cha!
:iconsinkingsunlight:
~SinkingSunlight Mar 13, 2008, 3:10:07 PM
I write some really quick stuff in math class sometimes when the teacher is just ranting about things. Well I like your poem, it tells a lot about emotion within it. It shows the deep feelings the speaker holds toward the other person :)

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Its me!
:iconbzoo53:
~Bzoo53 Mar 13, 2008, 3:55:42 PM
Lol XD
Aww :hug: Thankies!!! :glomp:

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~*Have Fun. Laugh Lots. Love Deeply. Live Life.*~

Bzoo53 A.K.A. Hopeless Romantic ^^;

:heart: I'm a book lover. :heart:

Thanks [link] for the icon! :glomp:
:iconbzoo53:
~Bzoo53 Mar 13, 2008, 3:56:33 PM
Aww :glomp: I'm glad that you like it! O yea, I'm a mind reader. XD

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~*Have Fun. Laugh Lots. Love Deeply. Live Life.*~

Bzoo53 A.K.A. Hopeless Romantic ^^;

:heart: I'm a book lover. :heart:

Thanks [link] for the icon! :glomp:
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